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Re: Can you check my sales letter?
Andras,
With all due respect your letter is missing several critical compnents of what I'd deem an acceptable sales letter: 1) No testimonials 2) No benefit rich bullets 3) NO compelling headline that makes the reader *stop* dead in their tracks 4) No compelling call to action 5) No psychological motivators I could go on. If you work on these, your letter would be greatly improved. Hope this helps, -Mike Wirth P.S. Email me at [email protected] if you want more specific details and/or help. |
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