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Old May 4, 2023, 12:35 PM
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Default I don't think it is very good.

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Just wanted to quickly chime in and thank you, Gordon, for this great find!
I'll write more later...
- Dien

I've read this several times, maybe for the Target market it is working gangbusters, but I see about half of it simply repeated over and over...maybe that is the readers of this pub need.

Not big on either TJ or Russ...recently (the past few months) had a transaction with Russ and wasn't satisfied...and TJ, who was once brilliant (when working with his wife)...just seems to have become one more of the same old same old, and this turn to Jesus. Well, OK.

Reminds me of an SCI copywriter who sold gold crosses with sand from Jesus' tomb embedded on it.

I always wonder, what would Jesus do, considering he threw over all the tables of the money changers, marketers of his day.

But gods have always found their UNITY groups. From a copy perspective, I feel both these guys are much better than this promotion...but maybe it is killing it in the circulars.

What do you think of it, copy wise?

Gordon
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