I certainly won't make any more comments about golfers, but if I was one, I know what I'd want ...

Gordon,

... I'd want 20 or 30 or 40 or 50 tantalizing bullets of info-bits, pulled right from the tape.

And if I was writing the piece, I'd transcribe the tape and then act as a bullet-seeking missile, going through every line of copy, deleting all the fluff, and leaving only the meaty sentences or phrases, then re-formatting them in the form of "Guess what this is" bullets designed to make even a golfer who needs Viagra want your tape instead.

It's a lot of work. But it works.

Richard

anymore about their score.

You have been most helpful. This is what happens when you try to do a 10 minute job...you get 10 minute results.

I'm embarrassed I even posted it that way.

But it did get some very good tips, so I guess that was worth my 10 minutes, I'll go to WORK on it for real now.

Gordon

Hi Gordon!

Echoing a bit from Mike and Paul...my first thought was to move the "Do you have a golfer on your Holiday list?" to the place where the headline would normally be, like Mike I wondered about the headline. If I did have a Golfer on my list I would be immediately interested....

Also, like Paul, I was thrown by the TARP coming out of the blue, I was not sure what that meant. I almost felt like saying, "This method" or something generic would be more effective if you did not want to spell out the title again.

Silly me, I even thought you must have a son named Jay! Maybe you do? Maybe I am simply confused as it is a Friday afternoon after a long week?

Have a restful weekend, I have truly valued the postings of all the Pictogrigms. I printed, and hand copied mine. Thank you so much!

With Purpose and Passion,

JULIE




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