Glenn
August 15, 2013, 11:07 AM
CHAPTER #7 - How an Apartment Manager Memorized 250 Temp
Employee Names with One Handshake Intro Each
Here's the Case Study:
Please notice that depending on what usage
you plan for some Case Studies/Testimonials
By changing the Title you can shift
the emphasis around.
In This Case We're focusing around
Wgt Loss using Mother Natures nutrition.
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"I Ate Like a Horse But Still Pulled My Belt
In a Notch"
Dear Glenn,
On my second day at a new job as Apartment Manager my boss
handed me a clipboard. Pointed to a huge truck outside.
Said, "You're just in time. We bought all new furniture for 400 apartments
so I called The ManPower Temp Agency and they're sending a few 100
manual laborers over to help you install it."
I never had that good a memory before. But somehow I memorized
everybodies name. The Super Sprouts, Spectrabiotic digestive Algae
and the Omega mineral algae were like magic.
Funny. I didn't realize anything was different. But the big boss showed
up during a morning meeting with the men. And I went around the room
and reeled off the names like clockwork.
Everybody was looking at me. "How did you DO that?"
So Thanks for making me look good. I just got a glowing EVAL Report
and a Raise.
A funny thing. Even though I wasn't used to heavy labor. And was older
and heavier than many of the TEMP guys. I was able to keep going until
5pm every day. 7 am to 5pm is a long day.
I was both helping unpack. Lift beds and living room and dining furniture
off trucks for two weeks. But I was able to keep track of what went where.
And Inspite of eating like a horse I pulled my belt in a notch.
Very nice.
Alan Baer
Baltimore, MD
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ACTION SUMMARY -
Ok.
As you see the above is a story based Testimonial.
It talks about Before and After.
Explains several Benefits:
A - Better memory
B - Looking good to the boss
C - Great Evaluation at work and a raise
D - More stamina and No-Thinking-Wgt Loss
What You Can't see is the way I wrote
the Headline for the Testimonial.
I read thru it.
Then lifted Alan's Words from the end of his story. Stuck
it up top.
Often when I'm writing something I'll start with
a working Title. FIRST DRAFT.
Then find a better Headline Buried in the
Copy.
You should do this too.
OK...
Up next.
CHAPTER #8 -
Employee Names with One Handshake Intro Each
Here's the Case Study:
Please notice that depending on what usage
you plan for some Case Studies/Testimonials
By changing the Title you can shift
the emphasis around.
In This Case We're focusing around
Wgt Loss using Mother Natures nutrition.
-------------------------------
-------------------------------
"I Ate Like a Horse But Still Pulled My Belt
In a Notch"
Dear Glenn,
On my second day at a new job as Apartment Manager my boss
handed me a clipboard. Pointed to a huge truck outside.
Said, "You're just in time. We bought all new furniture for 400 apartments
so I called The ManPower Temp Agency and they're sending a few 100
manual laborers over to help you install it."
I never had that good a memory before. But somehow I memorized
everybodies name. The Super Sprouts, Spectrabiotic digestive Algae
and the Omega mineral algae were like magic.
Funny. I didn't realize anything was different. But the big boss showed
up during a morning meeting with the men. And I went around the room
and reeled off the names like clockwork.
Everybody was looking at me. "How did you DO that?"
So Thanks for making me look good. I just got a glowing EVAL Report
and a Raise.
A funny thing. Even though I wasn't used to heavy labor. And was older
and heavier than many of the TEMP guys. I was able to keep going until
5pm every day. 7 am to 5pm is a long day.
I was both helping unpack. Lift beds and living room and dining furniture
off trucks for two weeks. But I was able to keep track of what went where.
And Inspite of eating like a horse I pulled my belt in a notch.
Very nice.
Alan Baer
Baltimore, MD
-----------------------
-----------------------
ACTION SUMMARY -
Ok.
As you see the above is a story based Testimonial.
It talks about Before and After.
Explains several Benefits:
A - Better memory
B - Looking good to the boss
C - Great Evaluation at work and a raise
D - More stamina and No-Thinking-Wgt Loss
What You Can't see is the way I wrote
the Headline for the Testimonial.
I read thru it.
Then lifted Alan's Words from the end of his story. Stuck
it up top.
Often when I'm writing something I'll start with
a working Title. FIRST DRAFT.
Then find a better Headline Buried in the
Copy.
You should do this too.
OK...
Up next.
CHAPTER #8 -
